Postcard Feedback for Andrew
- The quotes are all pretty quirky and humorous, but I'm not sure how much they relate to each other. They're all part of different entities and Archer is a drawn character. Archer's quote is also the odd one out, because quote #2 and #3 convey similar personalities. I would replace Archer with a real life person to make it more consistent, and use a quote that relates better with the other two.
- Another option is to take out Cody Ko(who is a Youtuber) and put in another TV character. This way all three come from TV shows. Either way just make the three more consistent.
- The black and white text colors are fitting. I would explore more typefaces.
- The phone version for Mac's quote looks kind of awkward because his name is on the right by itself. I would just put his name under the quote and make the width of the quote wider.
- Lack of quotation marks on the second quote.
- The way Archer's name is small in the mobile version works pretty nicely. You can incorporate that into the other ones.
- Also be consistent with how you credit the quotes. Archer's is just "Archer". Cody's is "- Cody". Mac's is "- Mac -". So try to choose one and go with it.